Teh Wozzinator

It's just the second and fourth lines that are supposed to rhyme....

"Quote: Apparently, the man who said ‘you are what you choose to be’ was a liar. A really horrible liar who took joy in making innocent little children believe that ...

Oh boy. This is the most stupid poem I've ever written. I wrote it when I [thought] I was in love. So... yeah. This isn't very great. Ignore it! BBB ...

The reason I did that is so that I wouldn't run out of character room. And I wanted to say that The Magic of Chocolate is the name of part ...

Roflmho! Awesome!!!!! This was seriously funny...

I love the part where the little boy trips and you think he got shot but at the end he gets up and you realize that he just tripped. Especially ...

Wow. Still awesome. I agree that the end wasn't perfect, you kind of lost the drama, but I'm still reading more, definitely. Anyways, no edits... Keep writing! Teh Wozzinator

Yelling? I am not yelling and I am not purposely out to insult the work of other people. i'm simple offering an opinion and "critiquing" work. And if you are ...

Actually "Cherryfield" is a name I came up with. By the way, ccm... remember me?? 'Tis Gud, from NaNo!! Lol... Anyways, thanks for the crit!

RIGHT- 1) You need to decide whether you want to write poetry or prose. Believe it or not there is a difference. Writing a story in verse is pointless- especially ...

I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I've been reading through the many pages I wrote of this story and there are a lot of run on sentences. =P (You ...

I'd like to say I enjoyed this- poem? but I refuse to lie, especially since it was absolutely boring. Afterall, whats to be gained from being nice and focussing on ...

What!!! You changed your title!! The old one was much better!

Heyhey, I really enjoyed reading this, expecially the way it was blank verse so you really went to town with your poetic voice, not having to worry too much about ...

Here's an edit: "Not that he had ever met any—it was only now that he carried an important message on behalf of the Kind I believe you mean "King"?? himself ...